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A short animation based on Edgar Allan Poe story.
Done for a school project. My first animation!:D
The goal was to make a 30 second animation in flash. I went a bit further though.
needs to be a little faster or maybe i'm just on a slow computer. you need also another music. this one doesn't fit. and for people who haven't read the short story written by Edgard Allan Poe ( Damn it ! ) they can't really understand what is really goin' on... but nice animation for a first one.
need a little more work on your flash skills
INot bad, but I expected a little more depth of story.
its no bad but thats not the entire story.
more to the story was that the guy was married and eventually murdered his wife and hid her body behind some rocks or rubble along with the cats body. The police came to investigate and didnt find anything till they heard a meowing of the cat behind the rubble. The police then arrested him and took him away.
This is not to be harsh or anything, you clearly have talent, You just need to develop your talent.
Tips. Don't loop the video. i want to choose if the video should be played again or not.
This is a serius video. i mean, he kills the cat. So don't put in jokes in the credits. No cats were harmed. well ofcourse, its a flash :-p
So yea. keep it up. you can do it.
Hey, thanks for the review!:) Ill try to get better :D
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