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Jun 21, 2012 | 12:17 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place June 23, 2012

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6/23/12 - Well, hot dog! I got daily 2nd place!
6/25/12 - Holy patoots - the short got featured on the front page! Thanks a lot everybody!

A shady businessman does his best to steal an innocent little girl's customers away with his rival lemonade stand.

My junior short at the University of the Arts, animated in Flash and touched up in After Effects.

The short is also on YouTube and such: CA
(I think the link gets a weird gap in it when I post this description, so just delete that space I guess)



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Love the video! Great job!

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Seemingly decent for a comedy-type animation.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

The animation was just superb good sir. Is Mr. Friday going to be in any more stuff?

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CarlDoonan responds:

Thanks a lot!
As of right now I don't have any plans to use Mr. Friday again, but I would definitely consider utilizing him in future projects.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty well done, you have potential.

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CarlDoonan responds:

Thank you, fine sir


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is fantastic! You deserve a big hand for this! The lines are generally pretty crisp, the voice acting is pretty good, and the story is quite entertaining. Great job!

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CarlDoonan responds:

Thanks! A lot of the line work was done toward the end of my semester through a multitude of all-nighters, so I'm glad it came across crisp overall.