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This is my first Flash project that I have succeeded in.
Ok, you said you'd like some tips so here goes. First, try to create all your own art, instead of a mix of yours and others. Second, try to create some matching styles, so we can have nicer looking combinations. Third, the more options you have, the more likely it is that people will find some they like. Fourth, sound effects/music add a lot to any game, you might want to consider trying to add some. Overall, not bad for your first flash, you actually have a working game, but you could do a lot better with a little more effort on the art. I'd like to see some more of your own design, because the torsos look pretty good. Did you draw the arms as well? Because they look amazing.
Why did you bother submitting this. There are only 10 things to choose from and the hat button doesn't work.
Like I've said, this was my first attempt at flash, that turned out to be somewhat successful. I wasn't expecting a high rating, but just any tips, reviews, or anything of the like. All I want is to attempt at bettering myself in this art.
You stole the backgrounds, which was an immediate bad sign. Everything is really lazily done. Hat doesn't work. You can learn off this, I guess, but you have to get better.
I'm not crazy about dress up games in general. It would have been better, though, if you has some schemes that actually matched each other. It could be useful in makiing up characters for a real game.
I understand, but this was my first actual success in flash animation. But, thankyou for your response.
ok. wow, this is actually pretty bad. i dont see a need to blam this but i dont see a need to save it either.
my vote is 1. because this game could be called a baby clothing game or something. the poor amount of choice is incredibly bad and the fact that is has no functionality exept for some buttons that change the character and background makes it rather poor. and the quality of this game is terrible.
for one thing, youve got a piece of high res body armour and 2 pairs of legs that look like they are made from... well, you get my point.. a kid would probably like the wolf head on a poorly made body..
I know, but this was my first attempt. Pretty much everything on there was made by me, including the body. Only the wolf and pony head were not mine.
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