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Will is fed up with his job. This was my first project working with a team of dudes, hope to do more in the future... Needs a preloader.
This really wasn't funny....... I was very disappointed. Please do not put as comedy when there may be one funny part in the entire thing.
Art: not at all bad for an early piece. Backgrounds could use a little more color.
Animation: Props for going with frame-by-frame, but it lacked fluidity. Work on it.
Style: I don't really see one yet. It's developing.
Story: A little cliche, but it was entertaining nonetheless.
Sound: Muffled, but clear. Voice acting was decent.
Overall: 3 out of 5. I had to dock half a point for the lack of a preloader at the beginning and a stop function at the end. But you've definitely got a good thing going here, and I look forward to seeing more.
Not what i first expected when i watched it. Lets see, very well animated, the voices were...okay, i mean, yeah they were well recorded but not really much emotion in them at all if im brutally honest, makes it hard to connect with the characters. A little slow paced but the message comes across in the end. All in all i liked it, found it funny with it's puns dotted throughout but the voice acting could've been better.
Hmm that was very interesting.
I liked the animation style and the way the characters were drawn. The frame-by-frame was very nice looking, the objects were very consistently drawn and the colors were pretty bright and pleasant to look at. I also liked the little message behind the whole thing, it was very unique. It was something new.
But what I didn't like was how lifeless it was. I think it could've been so much better, had so much potential. A lot of the voice acting was pretty sub-par, especially the boss lady, her voice sounded very flat and lacked emotion. The other characters were okay but nothing special. The fact that there were very basic-looking backgrounds and no music or many sound effects really took away the atmosphere of what it could've been, it was just... well, kinda boring.
But it had lots of potential, you definitely seem very good at this and without a doubt could make an incredible video pretty easily. Just need to breathe more life into what you do.
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