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Will is fed up with his job. This was my first project working with a team of dudes, hope to do more in the future... Needs a preloader.
It's funny cuz I can totaly relate to that.
There were definite times where the voice acting was not what it could have been, or the art was lacking, but all in all it was silly and good! The writing was fair and the story was, too, and I think with more practice and more work you guys could really put out something great! Keep at it, because there's a lot of potential here and a lot of classic humor at hand.
P.S. I love the voice of the main character, wonderful!
It was not a bad movie and I can see some work was put into it.
However, there are a lot of things you need to work on. First and foremost, a preloader. This is seriously needed. Second, there's a lack of music which I find okay because it's mostly about the voices of the characters. But you'll also need to work on the sound in general.
Third, the animation will need some work. It's not terrible, but it's average at best. I'd say particular work needs to be done on the arms and hands of the people. Although, the general idea of the cartoon was pretty cool. The humor also could have come across better by improving everything else.
Awesome movie! It's nice to see what people can make when you don't have a crazy 5-hour time limit. You have a great sense of humour and a neat art style and it makes for a very good end result. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future!
-Dave, who was at Skills Ontario with you
It was great, it just needed more emotional voice acting, very monotone.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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