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Jun 8, 2012 | 5:00 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place June 10, 2012

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Finished too late for NATA novice round this was my submission for the theme " The Elephant in the room."


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

that was really sad at first, but changed at the end. good story bro.

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Elphant suicid fail?>.<

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

that was depressing, but ended good

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

I came because i thought "How could a story about some stupid elephant be a drama?" but then i saw him going through all his hardships and starting to hate the world until he just couldnt take it anymore, so he tried to kill himself, but when his attempt fails and causes him to find love. It reminds me of myself, not cause i'm a fat elephant, but cause throughout my life i always though i wasnt important, and started to cut and burn myself, and it was when i found love that it all went away, because for the first time in my life i felt like i truly was important to at least one person i this world. This deserves more than just Daily 2nd, in my opinion :)

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