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Jun 7, 2012 | 9:04 PM EDT

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For NATA novice round

The theme: Elephant in the room
I took it literally and figuratively.

Now I'm going to publicly apologize to Seshido (the tank who voiced everyone), for cutting massive chunks and for only putting about a day's work into this.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

how did you even come up with that!!
THAT was awesooooooooome!!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Well this definently flowed with the theme in both meanings well. The story was pretty funny. And the animation was pretty good too.

Though I would suggest you get a LITTLE extra practice on drawing people laughing, because they look almost exactly the same as they do with their normal faces. (This leads to a problem since if there was a greater contrast to the mood at the picnic, I would've made this given this 5 stars.)

I think 3.5 is fair. (Not bad, But not Outstanding.) Good luck in NATA2012.

CyanSandwich responds:

Hey thanks for the review. Yeah the laughing definitely needed more realism. That was partly due to time constraints/laziness, but also because I probably wouldn't have pulled it off well.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Loved the laughing XD
- made me pee pee my pants :P

CyanSandwich responds:

I do love when my creations make people pee their pants.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad! It was pretty strange story-wise haha but definitely good, especially as far as the animation goes. The premise, though odd, was mildly entertaining too. Good work!

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CyanSandwich responds:

I can never tell whether or not the thing I just made was a piece of senseless rubbish. Reviews like this are always reassuring.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


CyanSandwich responds:

Why thank you.