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Mr. Davidson finally has a night to himself but when his nephew shows up, he'll have to make some hard choices.
Part 2 of the story started in episode 1. The first 3 episodes serve as a pilot that focus on introducing the characters.
I'll have to go back and see part one, but this was nice animation and dialogue. Keep up the good work.
what are they saying!?!?
lol good movie
Comedic timing needs improving.
Shorten the length you get to let a joke out.
Dialogue shouldn't be so sporadic, when you carry a joke between cut-scenes, there needs to be a better transition so the joke doesn't lose momentum.
The animation and the timing took a while I would gather, I can't say I'm a fan, but I can say it's a lot better than I can do.
Crass humor needs a touch of randomness, the randomness of scenes splicing is not that randomness. The ending to this movie is the biggest reason for my score. Review the way it was edited and how you lay the episodes main comedic premise.
I believe you can improve greatly, and wish you luck.
Thank you. I've been looking for some honest reviews on it.
it was ok
the actual story was funny and the jokes were good
but the voice acting needs practice. and the animation could use some work.
the movement seemed stale, and there was times i could barely hear the characters.
keep at it though.
Alright thanks. I should have lowered the volume on the music at some parts.
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