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Jun 2, 2012 | 4:43 AM EDT
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Alrighty! Finally ready to submit! (For the most part XD")

Well this has kinda taken me a...YEAR.. to do. Due to my lack of time and...laziness. I have always wanted to create an animated series with these characters. I've had them since I was about 12 ish? Some belong to YoshikoFuru of coarse <3

This I would say is my first real try at animating, and I defiantly learned A LOT. I now know tons of dues and don't s. I am still frustrated with a lot of this animation, I found is very difficult to find the right sound effects and soundtracks to go with this. That is something major I plan to work on, on ep 2... when ever I finish that.

I do wanna thank all the voice actors that participated in this! You gave life to the characters! Thank you ^//u//^

Also I know it may be confusing at the end... but it will become clear in ep 2. When it comes out.... so until then be confused XD""

But ha-whell... now ya get to watch another "Anime" series. Hope you like!

P.S Here is the dialogue for the middle section. I understand that the text may be to fast

We are humans that contain demon spirits within in our bodies. Everyone is fighting for control over KikenâEU¦ especially Gin. He has been trying to take over YuuâEUTMs third of the island and might prevail. Yuu, Gin, and Renki are the only leaders we have, we have to make sure that our forces are stronger. HeâEUTMs a sinister leader. He takes people who have been taken over by their âEUoeBirth DemonsâEU beyond there point of control. We canâEUTMt let Kiken be over run by the likes of him kai!
much time... we... "live" till about 21.We must protect Yuu! We must protect our territory!

Reviews


mysteriousartistXmysteriousartistX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I think this has potential, the animation is nice but the flow is a little off. It makes transitions form scene to scene very awkward.

My biggest issue is with Audio, it was inconsistent. The music at times was overbearing and so it was difficult to hear the voice actors. It's just a matter of volume, since the quality was not too bad.

As for story, I'll wait it out till the 2nd episode t hopefully clarify. :]


sweetyluli responds:

Yep that darn sound issue. Will work on that. And yeah it will become clear in EP 2. I wish I could come out with longer episodes but they take wayy to long to do XD"""


myk27xmyk27x

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

You've got a good storyline, and the art is rather good as well. The styling is not unfamiliar but not unwelcome and the voice acting is on par for the genre. I like it, overall.

I would have liked to have seen the subtitled plot lines acted out by the characters. It also seemed out of place and just randomly thrown in at that point. Felt like it needed something to make it necessary. Something like: "Why do we have to do this?" "You know the answer to that. (plot lines)".

The vocals in the intro were drowned out by the "background" music. Maybe that's just me, but it was hard to hear what was going on.

Keep on it! You've got a gem on your hands and I'd love to see you do it justice.



JeromiaJeromia

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The series needs some more improvements but it doesn't detract too much from the story. The characters are colorful and the story is well written.

Just a few more improvements and it'll be 5x more awesome :D



PastafariPastafari

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Seems pretty decent, but you should polish some things for the next episode such as: music volume, transition from scene to scene, and the subtitles, I could barely see them at certain points of the animation.
Keep it up!


sweetyluli responds:

That's something I plan on working on. Or having some one do for me. Looking for sounds and soundtracks is a real pain XD"


StereoideStereoide

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the animation style but some things really need some working on.
- the voiceover track in the beginning/intro needs to be a lot louder - it's almost uncomprehensible under the music
- the subtitles are not always in their space and sport some unlucky coloring sometimes (e.g. the description of the three leaders - grey font on grey background)