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Jun 2, 2012 | 4:43 AM EDT
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Alrighty! Finally ready to submit! (For the most part XD")

Well this has kinda taken me a...YEAR.. to do. Due to my lack of time and...laziness. I have always wanted to create an animated series with these characters. I've had them since I was about 12 ish? Some belong to YoshikoFuru of coarse

This I would say is my first real try at animating, and I defiantly learned A LOT. I now know tons of dues and don't s. I am still frustrated with a lot of this animation, I found is very difficult to find the right sound effects and soundtracks to go with this. That is something major I plan to work on, on ep 2... when ever I finish that.

I do wanna thank all the voice actors that participated in this! You gave life to the characters! Thank you ^//u//^

Also I know it may be confusing at the end... but it will become clear in ep 2. When it comes out.... so until then be confused XD""

But ha-whell... now ya get to watch another "Anime" series. Hope you like!

P.S Here is the dialogue for the middle section. I understand that the text may be to fast

We are humans that contain demon spirits within in our bodies. Everyone is fighting for control over KikenâEU¦ especially Gin. He has been trying to take over YuuâEUTMs third of the island and might prevail. Yuu, Gin, and Renki are the only leaders we have, we have to make sure that our forces are stronger. HeâEUTMs a sinister leader. He takes people who have been taken over by their âEUoeBirth DemonsâEU beyond there point of control. We canâEUTMt let Kiken be over run by the likes of him kai!
much time... we... "live" till about 21.We must protect Yuu! We must protect our territory!

Reviews


ManOfSnakesManOfSnakes

Rated 2 / 5 stars June 3, 2012

1st the animation flaw that i noticed was the mouth animation it was executed poorly.
2nd some of the characters are extremely typical some are unique but not very appealing to look at.
3rd Don't you think that guy with the sharp teeth somewhere at the beginning look like the guy with sharp teeth from Naruto?
4th ... Cat ears? Seriously? I don't think it suits the poor guy.
5th The animation is quite pathetic in my eyes I can see some anatomy errors and I myself ain't good at anatomy! Get some lessons on anatomy and you'll go far.
6th The voice at the beginning is way too quiet
7th And that guy from the beginning is kinda demonic I understand that but his design is way too typical.
8th the beginning part with Kai is also typical where he is all lazy
9th The music is alright sounds like something from a movie.
10th The subtitles are unclear your backgrounds overwhelm it with it's brightness.
11th the story I don't get it I missed out a lot of things because of your little subtitles but you said it will be explained in time so I guess i can wait.

I praise you for going for frame by frame as most newgrounders know that is really hard.
The camera angles were decent enough for me to say like a anime...
And finally I'd like to thank you for your hard work!


sweetyluli responds:

No cat ears *3*. But yeah I'll work on improvement in all areas.


myk27xmyk27x

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 3, 2012

You've got a good storyline, and the art is rather good as well. The styling is not unfamiliar but not unwelcome and the voice acting is on par for the genre. I like it, overall.

I would have liked to have seen the subtitled plot lines acted out by the characters. It also seemed out of place and just randomly thrown in at that point. Felt like it needed something to make it necessary. Something like: "Why do we have to do this?" "You know the answer to that. (plot lines)".

The vocals in the intro were drowned out by the "background" music. Maybe that's just me, but it was hard to hear what was going on.

Keep on it! You've got a gem on your hands and I'd love to see you do it justice.



MegaCarlManMegaCarlMan

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 3, 2012

I couldn't read half of the subtitles because of the white on white background. That's something you should've fixed before uploading, most of your readers missed out on 1/4 of the story. I think the animation was fine, but you really need to work on the timing in the next episode. Really need to have quick timing. The frog bit of him sitting and blinking wasted my time. The frog part where he yells at it and it shows his little "I'm shitting my pants" part took too long as well.

Other than those bits, this was really cool. I could see you doing some excellent work and am looking forward to seeing more.



tibs2tibs2

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 3, 2012

did he blow up the frog!? O.o


sweetyluli responds:

You'll see >:D


GgHaXoMgGgHaXoMg

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 3, 2012

some of the mouths from the side angle were abit ... strange


sweetyluli responds:

HAHA... I.. know XD""""