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Vote fairly! The mouth loop belongs to Wonchop.
Its randomness is too rough edged for my extreme majesty, but I can swallow your commitment and effort while praising them.
this is good. normally I'd write one of my trademark reviews that are 1,000,000 paragraphs long but I'm exhausted so I will write my points in a bullet list instead.
-it's more than a minute long which is always good.
-leg animation was brilliant.
-somewhat appropriately-placed sound effects.
-computer voices can be so bad that it's funny. and funny = good
-you mispelled "Squishables."
-unnatural 3D but still pretty good.
-I thought you were adding subtitles?
-the art, probably why nobody voice acted for you. it's very easy to draw which means even a 5 y/o can draw it.
-Lubch looks like a... well you know what he looks like, Mr. Icantcomeupwithaname already told you :)
-what are they saying sometimes?
-sometimes sound effects were out of place
-one leg is fatter than the other when the girl is like "hurr durr i is are wering 2 different socks n' 2 diferenta shoes!!!"
-it kinda dragged on, no real jokes or anything.
A NOTE TO THE AUTHOR
-if i say something's bad, don't apologize for it. just fix whatever was bad in any future episodes.
and something else but i forgot so enjoy this rating of 5 and my vote of 5.
I'll add subtitles soon. It's Flash CS5, so some stuff may be out of sync. I'll draw Skippy ( the girl is like "hurr durr i is are wering 2 different socks n' 2 diferenta shoes!!!" )'s legs better! She won't be in season 4, so I won't have to worry about her soon.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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