Mockthrough 1: Kirby
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- rated 3.15 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Parody
- videogame
- kirby
- mockthrough
- kuriboshoe
Author Comments
So THAT'S what goes through Kiby's mind after he eats somebody...
This marks my first submission to Newgrounds! Admittedly, the animation isn't anything to write home about, but I hope the joke is juuuust funny enough to make up for it.
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 1, 2012
Yeah I agree with that guy that the pacing was a bit slow but it was pretty funny. I liked it!
Thank you!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 1, 2012
LMAO My sound was off up until the part kirby ate tht thing,I thought he was trippin.
XD
Oop, sorry about that! Thank you, though.
Rated 0 / 5 stars June 1, 2012
I see what you tried (and failed) to do. With more effort this could be a good submission. I got the joke and all that. The animation was slow and unfunny.
What exactly do you mean by "The animation was slow"? Do you mean that it loaded slowly? Or that the pacing could have been faster, or..?
People who openly don't enjoy my work are often the people I want to hear the most out of. So, please, do tell me more if you'd be so kind.
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 1, 2012
Well, isn't this just what newgrounds is about.
Haha, thanks!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 1, 2012
i liked it. sure u could of drawn it out more. like add the guy he ate having memoried conversations and stuff. keep it up
Glad you enjoyed it! Also, thank you very much for the advice.