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So THAT'S what goes through Kiby's mind after he eats somebody...
This marks my first submission to Newgrounds! Admittedly, the animation isn't anything to write home about, but I hope the joke is juuuust funny enough to make up for it.
kirby sees the guys memoreys and says what have i done
I loved Kirby's voice (didn't expect it one bit) the music and overall the concept. Could maybe use a bit less awkward silent moments (I understand those must've been intended, but it's a bit on the slow side). I definitely hope you make this a series.
:O Thats Matt N' Patts theme song!!
That made my day.
but there really isnt that much to it
Yeah. I can only upload 20 MB to begin with, and this animation was pushing 18 MB as it is.
This was fairly entertaining, though it can use a bit more feeling.
The joke was good, but the characters feelings were subdued with the whispery voice. Its always hard to project, and you might be worried about overdoing it, but a quiet voice for a yell takes away from the feeling of the yell. Its not easy to project, I know, but belt out a good one. It'll help a lot! Also, giving a voice to kirby besies his typical 'Hii~' style of voice just seemed off. A thought (with facial expressions like uptruned eyes to show thought) would have worked, though. Also, perhaps the joke could be expanded by making him accidentally swallow or go to spit him out to release only a star, then end up with nothing after all of that (like in some games).
This video did bring a smile to my face, though, and the animations seemed fun and in a style that befits kirby and the joke. I hope that this turns into a series, because I really like the concept.
Yeah, I am planning on turning it into a series. I already have a few more scripts in the works, and I do intend on upping the amount of time I spend on the animation in the coming episodes.
Also, thanks a bunch for all the advice.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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