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May 29, 2012 | 2:17 PM EDT

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This was just something i threw together at the end of my senior year in high school as an experiment to see how i would do in flash. There is a lot of things wrong with it, any advice would be helpful. Thank you :)



Rated 5 / 5 stars

juest because everyone needs positive feed back and because your my bud keep trying you'll do great!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Amazing for a first run with flash! this is by far better than what I would usually see as someones first submission, you have obviously put some more time and work into it and for that reason alone it should stand to stay in eternal glory apon the grounds of new.

Couple of tips I could possibly give you are this:

Make sure you have a pre-loader, NG provides tons of them for free,
it plays on infinite loop, should have a replay button and stop once done playing through.
Even a few sound FX can brighten the entire thing and you can usually get them for free if you search long enough.

Art wize is not so much my field but I would say that some of it moves by a little too quickly for me to get a sense of what is going on, he opens a box and there is something inside it that makes him dissapointed? or the thing dissapears? its not realy quite clear.

All critique aside this is a very solid piece that shows you have artistic skills and can put them to use making something that is very watchable :)

- Cheers

Khoalazan responds:

I'm very interested in doing so :D but it is very expensive to obtain the materials that helped me accomplished this piece of animation


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good for a first animation, adding colour and sound would help though :)


Rated 3 / 5 stars

This is actually pretty good for a first Flash. You use more frame-by-frame stuff than a lot of Flash animators do, including myself! The lack of sound, though, might make some people lose interest in it. As this Flash movie has no dialogue, you could add in appropriate sound effects or maybe some background music.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad the animation is fluid and such. It could have done with some sound or color to liven it up. Good attempt!