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That was not funny nor does it make sense to have it rated E when their is blood shown. Dude you suck, not gonna say I'm better but I know how to spot quality. You got potential but you clearly dont care to put your best into, so really you dont deserve a good score.
Honestly I was expecting a reference to the hit TV show Monk. A special needs detective taking pain killers to slow time down to save his loved ones. THAT would have been interesting.
That's not to say this was bad, but your audience of appeal is incredibly small. (I'm not in that audience.)
Your animating skills obviously show that you do know what you are doing. Though the story SUCKED. I didn't find this amusing at all. I was hoping for a kind of parody maybe since the title says Monk Payne. Though, you sort of kind of wasted your time adding so much detail to all that you just drawn just to show a coincidence at the end with the game? I'm giving this a high rating due to the fact you can animate. You just decided to not give this enough soul for a story line I guess.
Thanks for the feedback! I started animating without any plans on where this was headed to. So I guess that's why people hated it so much, though I still find the joke I made funny (haha). I'll try to make up for my lack of storytelling skillz next time.
Anyway, nice art, keep working on it though and try shading more of your stuff to achieve ultimate success.
Like in the beginning. The shading in the beginning is really nice.
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Rated 0 / 5 stars June 19, 2012
That was not funny nor does it make sense to have it rated E when their is blood shown. Dude you suck, not gonna say I'm better but I know how to spot quality. You got potential but you clearly dont care to put your best into, so really you dont deserve a good score.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 29, 2012
I agree with the previous poster about the story.
Honestly I was expecting a reference to the hit TV show Monk. A special needs detective taking pain killers to slow time down to save his loved ones. THAT would have been interesting.
That's not to say this was bad, but your audience of appeal is incredibly small. (I'm not in that audience.)
Rated 4 / 5 stars May 29, 2012
Your animating skills obviously show that you do know what you are doing. Though the story SUCKED. I didn't find this amusing at all. I was hoping for a kind of parody maybe since the title says Monk Payne. Though, you sort of kind of wasted your time adding so much detail to all that you just drawn just to show a coincidence at the end with the game? I'm giving this a high rating due to the fact you can animate. You just decided to not give this enough soul for a story line I guess.
Thanks for the feedback! I started animating without any plans on where this was headed to. So I guess that's why people hated it so much, though I still find the joke I made funny (haha). I'll try to make up for my lack of storytelling skillz next time.
Rated 3 / 5 stars May 29, 2012
Not bad at all
Glad to hear it.
Rated 3 / 5 stars May 28, 2012
I didn't get the ending. But I do now.
Anyway, nice art, keep working on it though and try shading more of your stuff to achieve ultimate success.
Like in the beginning. The shading in the beginning is really nice.
herp@ posting the same comment twice.
Thanks Damien.