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May 25, 2012 | 7:08 PM EDT

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my first animation, is short but I am beginner, so I hope you enjoy

Reviews


Spas123Spas123

Rated 0 / 5 stars May 26, 2012

Bad animation bad voise and an endless loop.



PsychopathPsychopath

Rated 0 / 5 stars May 25, 2012

I can't believe that the Flash portal has become so ghetto that I actually have to tell little fucktards like you the following:

Preloaders, learn how to use them, stop using FLV's for minuscule animations and learn how to use the properties tab in Flash to readjust your height x width proportions so that way the stage doesn't outsize the actual content.

I would critique the animation, story, voice acting and such, but if it comes to the point where I can't even properly watch the damn thing without a high speed connection, then those problems obviously aren't first on the "things to fix" list and shouldn't be acknowledge by critics at all, because doing so distracts from the core problem and thus reinforces it.

I wouldn't be surprised if these accounts uploading these shitty files were alts created by the admins as an attempt to promote their shitty, out of date video playing rig by pointing at shit like this an arguing that these "authors" and their lack of knowledge in Flash justifies the video playing rig's existence.



darkwizard229darkwizard229

Rated 0 / 5 stars May 25, 2012

I think it could use a little more work and need to have some good jokes. Also I couldn't understand most of what people were saying. If you could work on it a bit more it might be pretty decent.


TuRyGaMeS responds:

I'm sorry, I put the following subtitles, so that people can understand


RaumTDSRaumTDS

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars May 25, 2012

You had the right bg music thats it and thats the only thing i understood
Make sure you can understand what your saying because i couldnt grasp what you were saying
animation was deece i guess make a better background


TuRyGaMeS responds:

I'm sorry, I put the following subtitles, so that people can understand