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His name is Jesus, he left his village to go to the big city, but unfortunately he found he could not control things.
It's a strong effort, but nothing too spectacular. You definitly capture the feel, and most of the look of south park, but there's alot less polish here that feels like the work of an amateur, espcially in the shots of the house. With a little practice and polish you could become something good.
The music was definitely very fitting. It really conveys hopelessness, especially with that sweet twist at the end. Work with that, build a good story and narrative, because that's ultimately is what draws people into new series like this. Again, polish and development will be your wings, so take them and good luck.
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