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This is a small project I started 3 days ago.
And thought not proceed unless you wish.
So if you want to put it in the comments
Needs more death and that guy at the bottom just falls over for no reason. Have himshoot the wall then himself. Also put boobies in it at random, people love random boobies.
Having read the last five reviews, theres little to add, so I'll stick to the basic stuff, animation is a little bit too short, not bad, just short. The effects are good, the timing is not bad, but check the first hole in the face of the guy who is stabbed, you'll see it appears earlier...and where does the blood go?, I feel I'm in a 300 madness sequel. Keep up the good work. Hope this helps you
This was obviously made for the sake of messing around.
It was a pretty fluid animation and you got loads of potential man.
Good job, just make it a bit longer next time.
It's okay but you really need to improve how you draw blood at this time because it makes a bad effect, and you need to make it a higher detail, people on collabs have set a big bar for tribute flash that can be unfair to those inexperienced with flash. Just keep practising your drawing and effects and you will be okay just remember everybody who is someone on newgrounds made crappy flash at first so nobody can blame you for starting out okay 2/5 keep improving.
Going back, one last time...
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