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After a month of hard work, and a month and a half of procrastination, it's finally here!
I tried to do more frame by frame with this one, and planned it a lot more than previous ones, I believe it's my best work, and I'm really proud of it.
It's the longest animation I did, with a little more than six minutes of length!
Also, thanks to everyone who auditioned, animators like me would be nowhere without talented voice actors and supporters!
Shock-Dingo did a great job, you should favorite him. NOW!
I don't know what else I can say, if you have any criticism and questions, you can leave a review or PM me, I'll reply.
Thanks everyone! :)
Hilarious,but unrealistic settings and pretty sad ending.
haha, yeaaah, most people hate the ending, oh well =\
This is a good step forward, my friend. I'm in agreement with Twisted4000, you know what you're doing for the most part. it's just a matter of pushing yourself a bit harder to get every last drop of entertainment out of your script.
And also, I and other members of newgrounds really enjoy it when something clean AND funny makes it to the front page. Don't ever change that.
they died :( why werent both omnivores
omnivores:eat both plants and meat
There were some things I liked and some things I didn't. I didn't feel to strongly about this cartoon negatively or positively, I think it was just okay.
For one thing, the visuals. Overall they are well-done, simplistic and clean. Very basic, but I see that is the style you are going for. It looks good in itself. I kinda like the color scheme, everything's in sort of a duller shade. As far as animation and coloring goes, it looks like you understand what you're doing.
Script is good, I like the screenplay and dialogue you have here, but a lot of the time I kinda found it tedious and slow-moving. Also, the actual concept and plot I didn't particularly like, I mean he's annoying the other dinosaur, but nothing really adds up to anything, he gets annoyed, and then they both just sorta die... I dunno, didn't do it for me. But I like how it has a decent running-time, it's not overly short, or TOO long. Though I kinda thought it was just a little tedious is all.
Voice acting is great, I loved it. Especially the t-rex.
Overall, it looks like you know what you're doing when it comes to making a cartoon, with the script, getting good-quality audio, and being able to handle the style of art and animation you are attempting to accomplish, though that quality may be a little sub-par, to me, anyway. It wasn't my favorite but I in no way hated it. I'd like to see more from you, I'll just leave it at that, pretty nice job.
"Muah!" made me spit out my drink from my nose!
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