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May 22, 2012 | 7:35 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place May 24, 2012

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Author Comments

After a month of hard work, and a month and a half of procrastination, it's finally here!

I tried to do more frame by frame with this one, and planned it a lot more than previous ones, I believe it's my best work, and I'm really proud of it.

It's the longest animation I did, with a little more than six minutes of length!

Also, thanks to everyone who auditioned, animators like me would be nowhere without talented voice actors and supporters!

Shock-Dingo did a great job, you should favorite him. NOW!

I don't know what else I can say, if you have any criticism and questions, you can leave a review or PM me, I'll reply.

Thanks everyone! :)

Reviews


boianostefanboianostefan

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hilarious,but unrealistic settings and pretty sad ending.


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Steinberg responds:

haha, yeaaah, most people hate the ending, oh well =\


JerrodStormJerrodStorm

Rated 5 / 5 stars

This is a good step forward, my friend. I'm in agreement with Twisted4000, you know what you're doing for the most part. it's just a matter of pushing yourself a bit harder to get every last drop of entertainment out of your script.
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And also, I and other members of newgrounds really enjoy it when something clean AND funny makes it to the front page. Don't ever change that.


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AbrhamAbrham

Rated 5 / 5 stars

they died :( why werent both omnivores
omnivores:eat both plants and meat



Twisted4000Twisted4000

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

There were some things I liked and some things I didn't. I didn't feel to strongly about this cartoon negatively or positively, I think it was just okay.

For one thing, the visuals. Overall they are well-done, simplistic and clean. Very basic, but I see that is the style you are going for. It looks good in itself. I kinda like the color scheme, everything's in sort of a duller shade. As far as animation and coloring goes, it looks like you understand what you're doing.

Script is good, I like the screenplay and dialogue you have here, but a lot of the time I kinda found it tedious and slow-moving. Also, the actual concept and plot I didn't particularly like, I mean he's annoying the other dinosaur, but nothing really adds up to anything, he gets annoyed, and then they both just sorta die... I dunno, didn't do it for me. But I like how it has a decent running-time, it's not overly short, or TOO long. Though I kinda thought it was just a little tedious is all.

Voice acting is great, I loved it. Especially the t-rex.

Overall, it looks like you know what you're doing when it comes to making a cartoon, with the script, getting good-quality audio, and being able to handle the style of art and animation you are attempting to accomplish, though that quality may be a little sub-par, to me, anyway. It wasn't my favorite but I in no way hated it. I'd like to see more from you, I'll just leave it at that, pretty nice job.


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leifoleifo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

"Muah!" made me spit out my drink from my nose!