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May 21, 2012 | 6:00 PM EDT

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My first real attempt at animation! Reviews are appreciated

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ArchonicArchonic

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 21, 2012

Not bad for a first attempt.
Animation: Smooth, flawless, looks like you've already got this covered.
Graphics: Alright, but a little bland. Instead of giving everything one or two colors, you could maybe add a little contrast/color variation in the future.
Sound: Perfect for the scene, great choice.
Overall: In terms of overall enjoyability, I'll have to go with "meh", though I can definitely see you going places in future animations.


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ZhonZhon

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 21, 2012

For your first "real" attempt, that was great. Smooth and clean animating, sounds were timed nicely. Very simple but well executed. I applaud you sir.


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m3n3llim3n3lli

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 21, 2012

Very nice flash. Good animation and well used sounds. I'd work a bit on enviroment detail and character detail (guy looks totally like from a Terrence or Phillip from South Park).

Other than that all's good. Keep at it :)


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SigmaNoobSigmaNoob

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 21, 2012

Guy: I believe I can fly!

*SPLAT*

Good job man.


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1600 responds:

haha thanks!