This is my first animation series that I wish to one day want it to become popular across the internet, The Silly Adventures of Jack and Mack, episode 1, food. This is part 1 of 2 because of the amount of time I had remaining on my college project. When I say college, I mean like learning institute, I'm not an uni level yet so this may or may not seem an awful lot detailed. But thats where you lot come in! This animation was the reason why I wanted to get a newgrounds account, because I wanted to recieve critical comments from animators alike.
So what i'm looking for is what you liked, what you didn't like and any possible changes you would make to it.
Again, this is not like Harry Partridge level of animating or similar, but I someday hope to be that good, it's a start really :)
Thanks for viewing and please, criticize it, don't just simply say "It's good," or "It's bad," cos really, that's not entirely giving me alot of criticism.