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Your line-work, shading, and overall animation is very clean and well-crafted, which is what I love about all your stuff, but this one in particular wasn't really funny to me, and like what nikkz said, nothing really built up to anything. I also have to say it was pretty vague as well. Will always look forward to your future videos, but this one was kinda just a speed-bump in the road to me.
It's good, but somehow the animation doesn't build up to anything.There is no story, just gags/jokes that have been stitched together in some sort of vague context. You can do better than that!
I'm a big critic of your work. I'm going to partly mirror what TarileFreak said below. I say this only because I love you.
The quality of your animations is pretty good, but the quality of your stories are going down hill. Luckily the stories are still better than 95% of what's out there.
The stories aren't exactly "terrible," though. They would be AMAZING in an episodic. Sadly, I don't think you have the time or resources to produce something like that. But if you did, I'm pretty sure you would land cozy job doing what you love.
Here's my challenge to you: create a spec. A "GOOD" animation and send it to Adult Swim while asking for your viewers for help. The people from the "Joker Blogs" did this and they got funding from Warner Brothers (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W5ukc NzjgC4 if you need an example). Anything you produce would be MUCH better in quality and story than ANY of the original content they produce.
We need more of you. I mean this sincerely. Please, land a job where you get money to make this stuff. You'll be happy and we'll be happy.
I must say : i do usaly hate your work. I have trie to watch some of it and i just don't enjoy it at all.
But this video whas differant and i realy love it x) Few nice gag, very good timming, sweet grapich and everything x)
This is not your best work..
Welcome to the theatre of your mind, Dale
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