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A short animation in the Squarelings unviverse! Squack (blue jacket green shirt) pokes Squaniel (blue shirt)!
I like the fact that the animation is somewhat "smooth", however the movie suffers from a multitude of problems.
For start, the music does not end after the end of the animation, so a stop-sound code needs to be implemented. Second the load-bar extends out the side of the load box. (and the loading screen is a drab red)
Moving onto the animation, the houses were purely pastel colored, which in my opinion makes the movie much weaker. A cloud in the sky would help distinguish it from a large blue blob. The explosion of the guy wearing glasses doesn't look very realistic either.
The story doesn't make sense, and to me, it looks like you put in very little time into this.
I also don't like the fact that there is a guy jacking off in the billboard of the last scene...
You have a lot to improve.
it was a little short try harder.
Someting wrong with the preloader. The animation is not that bad.
Yeah the preloader messed up when I did it, but thanks anyway...
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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