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May 13, 2012 | 4:01 PM EDT

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An advert commissioned by a friend. Took 12 hours. It's nothing special, it's just going to be featured on his website.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I've seen quiet a few improvements here, you need to practice drawing landscapes cityscapes and so on, but just make sure that it does move away from your style so i doesn't look weird when you add your characters


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice! Keep on improving, man! :)

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is okay as far as adverts go.

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

Your art is getting really bad lately and short.
I seen radials, they are overused, you should ONLY use them if they look good.

Your animations are lacking

- Time and patience put in
- Quality standards
- Voices (cherry on top)
- Length , short animations only work if there funny, like Explosm shorts.

To be honest, you need ALL of them above if you expect an award or something similar.
Good luck in the future, but this is by far the worst animation of yours.

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The only way it can be my worst animation ever is if you've only seen everything I have made after and including "Your iPhone is Broken". Although, this was rushed, as I had to have it finished within 2 days.