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Flash CS6, 2 days. Watching this video on a slow connection? It sucks, I know. Comments would be great, I'd love to hear where I can improve!
Quite the amusing and creative flash animation you've made.
Superb effort with this.
Thanks so much! Your review is much appreciated!
I liked it, but when it showed him writing, he was just moving his hand really fast. And why did he change into SuperTan; what was he after? I just saw some flying thingy out the window. But aside from that, LOL! It was funny; the pilot's reaction, the epic music then the death. Great job.
Thank you for your response, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I guess if I gave myself more time with this I would have slowed down the hand and perhaps added a siren to the car driving past the window. I just wanted to finish it as I'm doing an English essay right now that's in for tomorrow XD
Lol! >< Good tweening, and the animation dosent look stiff as you've changed the smoothness of the outline through each frame, the music was good, but the timing could have been better, and the animation should have been a little shorter, other then that good. 4 stars.
Thanks for the feedback! I didn't really have a plan for this on paper, I just wanted to animate something and my friend came to mind :)
(I should mention that he once ripped open his school clothes to reveal a Superman suit and fled from the classroom.)
Only two days? Not bad!
However, you did spend too much time on the zoom in shots of two repeating frames and static images. Also, just a note, in places such as the plane, using straight lines from the computer really stood out from the rest of the hand-drawn lines. The next time you do that, you'll at least want to draw over the lines.
Again, good job for a beginner! Keep on trying!
Thanks a lot! I'm still experimenting :) and yes, 2 days :D
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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