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This is a chronicle of that one time when I shrunk down and lived in my dollhouse.
More is coming.
if you like, see more of my work here www.youtube.com/ beccajhyman
thanks newgrounds for allowing video formats now. awesome.
Pretty cool. Nice grim atmosphere, cool absurd-esque story. The animation on the girl could use some work, and the sound design as well...The constant loop was getting kind of annoying after a while. Apart from that, fucking 4 start post! Aww sheet
i appreciate the peeing...and Radiohead. Good work
even cartoons need to pee. and YEAH RADIOHEAD. cool that you recognised the poster. thanks!
The looped ambiance noise got to me. I can't put a finger on it, but just something about it that was off. Other than that, it's a pretty cool experiment.
Now that was pretty suspenseful.
I wonder what will happen in the rest of the chronicle?
I'm sorry but for me this submission lacks anything really new. I like Alice in wonderland stuff a lot, I can find myself in macabre surrealism, but this is just not new nor entertaining for me.
It's a very nice submission for art class, way better than average I'm sure, and I'm also sure you'll find a lot of people who like it a lot.
But to me it's only a very good beginning of something, it's to shallow to be a masterpiece yet.
Don't just be way better than average, be amazing, find a way there.
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