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The tale of an adventure begins as many do; under the influence of alcohol.
I enjoyed the script and voice acting though i wasn't a huge fan of the art style. Some of the colours were a bit garish but the mouths with their large teeth were quite unique and i liked that. The lip synching was decent and the facial expressions were comical, it was perhaps all a bit static but the script didn't demand that much movement.
You blended the photo backgrounds well with the vector foregrounds and the drawn backgrounds were good too. The pacing was good (which is very important with comedy) and the characters were all interesting and distinct. Some good work!
Thank you for giving us some feedback! It's nice to have such positive feedback. I can understand not enjoying the overall style, afterall it's just a matter of opinion. We are always lookng for ways to improve things though.
Really good! It was interesting and had a great story line. Good job.
Thank you for the praise!
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