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A first, and test of a series that will eventually become a compilation of shorts all meshed into one! (Sorry for the lack of a replay button i'll learn that for the next one)
sweet drawing skills!
hey thanks dude
Nice start! Some things I would improve on are:
1. Using the same animation, but with faster frame rates.
2. Increase the bit rate of the audio.
3. Use fade in and fade out tweening.
4. Use "linear" coloring types and they could be prettier.
That's pretty much all your flashes need. And for the replay button:
This is really not bad for a first animation! Keep doing it and I can assure you, you will go places.
those are good tips, and thanks for the link dude.
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