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A kid goes too fast on a Merry-Go-Round.
Now on youtube as well. http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=g82ty1xTG4g
Well done. The boy's movements, mug-takes & reactions all do a splendid job of setting the stage and foreshadowing the inkblot "past." The repetitive, rhythmic bounce of the other children on the playground also generously contributed to setting a mood to the piece that hasn't been effectively captured for many years. Some of the prior reviews posted have missed the point of this piece by complaining about the qualities of this piece that are its greatest strengths. Sure, anyone can "draw" inkblot characters, but it takes a lot of talent to bring them to new life. It was apparent that you did your homework, and put a lot of heart into this piece.
The art style was good but the actual animations were annoyingly bouncy, slow and choppy. You didn't really do much with the time travel, basically ending with "Woo, it's black and white! Let's bounce some more! The End."
It looked like you were running out of time, as the playground scene has the most attention and the quality drops from there. It seems like this cartoon was just a victim of deadlines.
Now I know it's cool to take the pill that fat old guy down the street keeps offering me! Yay!
I suppose if a Flash cartoon could time travel that is what ITS past would look like. Good job!
FUNGASM i have to tell you something about your future
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