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Uploaded
May 9, 2012 | 3:58 PM EDT

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Hello,
This is my first animation in Flash! That why this is so short. Please tell me what I should do better in future. Don't hate me :D
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DeckyDecky

Rated 1 / 5 stars

It really is short isn't it. There are a number of things that could be improved here for example the massive white background at the begining. But mainly I'd advice you to watch a few tutorials on youtube and then practice and try again.


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ZrugelZrugel

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Your right about it being short, but more to the point, in the future try to have your movies explain something or be funny or tell the viewer a story. In other words try to convey a point that you set out to make the video for in the first place.
Setting aside the lack of concept, this isn't a bad animation, I've seen a lot worse, and this being your first I can see you have potential, if you develop your skills you could get really good.
But for now, keep practicing.


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