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May 8, 2012 | 5:11 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place May 10, 2012

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Wowee zowee! Front paged! Thanks Tom!
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Created in about 25 days for the Newgrounds Annual Tournament of Animation, open round (Oh boy, I really hope i make it to Round 2!).

I got a jumpstart planning out this flash under the title "Time Prank." Originally in the video, Connor(Schafdawg) suggested we go back in time and prank one of our past selves. Though, unfortunately and a little ironically, time began to run a little short for the plot we had in mind. We had to drastically change('dumb down' probably being more accurate) the story in order to shave the film down to a manageable duration for someone like me(i.e. a noob) to animate.

I really hope you all like it, and i'm always glad to hear constructive criticism from the users on Newgrounds. That said, I really hope there isn't too much worthless hurtful criticism I have to sift through. I HAVE FEELINGS TOO, YOU KNOW. *sniffling

let's see, what else... hmm... OH! credit goes to Linde from 8bitpeoples.com for the opening song. it's all royalty free, copyright free, legally obtained, etc, so no worries there. And double credit to the contributors of the Audio Portal. :)

P.S. I LIKE MONKEYS OKAY? THERE I SAID IT (I'm really hyper right now).

Reviews


goodtolifegoodtolife

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

all in all i like the storey art could use a littel work but that is all the flaw i see keep up the good work and keep us lol ing all over the place



JacobSzlekJacobSzlek

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

cool



GokuVegetaGogettaGokuVegetaGogetta

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I liked this. I felt that perhaps it moved a little slowly, but hey, whatever, it was still totally funny.

Animation wasn't half bad and the voice acting pretty decent. It only kinda had the one big gag in it but that's fine.

Three and a half stars is a lot, you can buy lots with that.


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JerrodStorm responds:

Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, I'm aware that I've still got some pacing issues. It's one of the things I planned to improve on during the contest.


NakrullNakrull

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

well... okey funny story and nice animation... but mediocre :S

If a freind of mine had made this, and wanted me to come with some last minute changes:

The blond kids voice.. its not as good as the other ones. Both quality vice (another mic?) and just the "acting" in itself.
AND
The story needs more phasing! Anything could do this! Some music while they talk, or faster editing, other angles for variety.. There's just something about it.. something that makes me wanna close the player and watch something else, because its to "slow and borring"-ish.. Luckily i didn't, cus it was a fun little story.
ALSO
The payoff is kinda weak.. Have it be like a giant exhibition, and the monkey like "LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!.. it just a bit "hey, here it is, look, the died, lol"

Take or leave it, but thats my honest opinion.


JerrodStorm responds:

No no, thank you, really. I really appreciate the specificity of your suggestions. My friends and I probably won't be voice acting for next round's entry (that's if I make it). And pacing has always been a weak point of mine. I'll definitely take your thoughts into account. :)


NuttymamaNuttymama

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

This was dumb


JerrodStorm responds:

you, my friend, have a lot to learn about flash videos.