As a game developer, I actually like this movie. I could help out if you plan to make a series. It has some potential, and learning of the character's backgrounds would help add to that.

Also learning who the dark cloaks are would be cool. All three characters are cool; knowing who Edgar is, like his race, would be cool.

I give 5 stars for the creativity, and effort. As a creator myself, I know how hard it is to finish something. I hope you return and make this into something. The music was cool, and the so was the story!

Wow amazing Tyler! Didn't know you where so good at animation (:

On a stylistic level, I like the rough edges of the characters and animation.

That was quite the incredible short!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

good acting, but

voice of dying mother needs a bit more work, but its not bad since its more...clear? but a bit too clear