Going back, one last time...4.60 / 5.00 55,510 Views
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.4.39 / 5.00 4,483 Views
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him4.40 / 5.00 17,513 Views
The third day of my 30-day flash marathon.
Even though Day 1 was submitted on May 5 by NG time, it was still May 4 in my timezone, and due to a bombardment of schoolwork on Sunday, I had to skip a day. Luckily, the timezone differences granted me an extra day.
Today was no different, regarding the schoolwork. The first one, an entry to the Creative Idea Collab by nat29, is unfinished and was a side project of mine. It was basically a unique spin on a character of his, NOT an attack.
The second one was an alternate ending to my entry to the Odd Collab. A bit short, but I added it there so that the collection doesn't look so pathetic. I also intended to include an old self-removed submission of mine, "Nyan King William," but ActionScript mishaps prevented me from doing so.
For the first one, actual execution-relevant criticism is greatly appreciated, instead of a mere "Not entertaining."
Let me know what you think!