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I'M ON YOUTUBE
Hey everyone c:
I made this in a few days. It's nothing special.
Very short, but a lot of work went into it.
It was kind of a test. I wanted to try using a few more frames between movement, and a bit less blur.
I don't hate Banjo-Kazooie Nuts And Bolts.
But It just is nowhere near as good as the other two.
I like the colors and most of the animation, but the drawings were very sloppy and a lot of the motion didn't really make sense, like they sort've flip out of proportion at the end of a motion, or there wasn't enough force behind a movement. Also I think you over-abuse that line-shake effect, it's fine to use it, but do it a little more subtly. What really killed it for me was it's running-time though, that was very very very short. I know it was a test, but still, you're uploading it to Newgrounds. You're getting somewhere with your animation, but please, just take a step back, spend a lot of time on a longer video with a lot of quality.
Pretty good, but you know going back to Nintendo won't change anything.
I liked the animation and audio quality, but I diddn't really see the point in the video, was the part where the guys says ''alot of drugs'' supposted to be funny? I personally thought it was one of those monents where you wonder where the hell it came from. Keep up the great work, just make the story a little better.
A good flash entry
Another god entry we have here, and its always a pleasure to find some interesting and appealing submissions like this, allthough some do need more effort, but still nice to find,a nd with this one i can tell the effort was done just needs a tad more effort on some areas, So i have not really been a fan of the Banjo Kazooie games i believe i have only played one or two of the original ones, but this was kind of neat, The animation was notbad, it was pretty frsh looking i thought, The voices cameout well, there was some good quality to them and shows you have put some time into this, And that brings me to the fact that you won some awards for this, so good job there and congrats and your work does show why youdid win some awards well deserved, and hope you win more in the future, A fine flash you have here with a few changes and adjustments i could even be better unless it doesnt need any at all, but for the mostpart i was pleased and entertained with this, it was interesting and had an ok topicmatter, i wouldnt mind seeing more on this though,
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So improvments are not the easiest to come by but to have a better product we should atleast try and put the effort forward, So i may have a few ideas here and there but if i dont in this particular review then you have done well enought on this but anyways try and push things forward, and use some nifty ideas and suggestions here, But honestly you did pretty well with this, i really cant find anything so maybe this one is fine as is.
Oh, KawaiiPirahna. I used to think you were one of the underrated kids with potential. But then your animations go down the hard road because you got the popularity.
Your animation needs loads of work. Your proportions are very too... I don't even know the word to describe them. The characters appear to grow bigger as the flash goes along. The movements are pretty poor as well. It's like you can't even handle the animation style you're trying to achieve.
The content, well, kinda fell flat. It was pretty predictable to begin with, and I think I only chuckled at "vehicle based platforming". But the drugs part absolutely destroyed the movie.
Please go back to not sucking as much :'[
Let's get down to grinding.
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