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The Rise of Facebook Pt.2

rated 4.03 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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May 6, 2012 | 11:19 AM EDT

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Join us as we look back over the years at Facebook; witness its tranformation from a hip social networking platform to a feared world super power by 2019. Part 2 sees the release of the All Seeing iPad and Mark Zuckerberg's eventual public breakdown.

Part 1: /portal/view/595020

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

This is for both parts.

I have to agree with what Transparent Presence said about this mockumentary. This is a prime example of how satire should be done and beats Ebolaworld, Sirkowski, Pox power, and SnakeJohnson by a thousand kilometers. As a huge hater of Social Media, "Smart" phones, and that iNooKindexurface tablet crap, this cartoon was very poignant and needs to be seen by more and more people. (I quit using Facebook years ago, don't have a MySpace account, and won't use Twitter.) Now, with that out of the way...

When it comes to the animation, you did an excellent job on the lip sync and I like your newspaper comic style. However, considering what others have said before, I suggest that you look up body language. It'll make a much bigger difference in your next mockumentary. In the audio department, the voice acting in this is a lot better than most cartoons that involve the same damned voice actors that we've heard too many times already. I don't know if anyone has said this before, but you have the ear of a director. That and the music that was selected fit perfectly. Finally, the content of this cartoon was very witty and well-delivered. While this may not have ultra-fast pacing; it didn't need to. Your script was excellently written and clever use of subtle sight gags. As said before, I'm sick of the whole social network/smartphone/mobile tablet crap. As far as I'm concerned; we ought to do to them what the punk and metal scenes did to disco. Well, enough of that, I'll look forward to you guys riffing on Apple and Google.

What I liked about this:
-Great voice acting
-Excellent music
-Nice lip sync

What I didn't like:
-Tended to drag a little

Overall: Here's a nine from me and keep kicking ass. (4.5/5)

killourkid responds:

wow, thanks for a great review :) i'm glad you enjoyed it! for my next cartoon i will definitely be *attempting* to do some body animation. i'm more of a writer than an animator so i apologise in advance if it sux


Rated 4 / 5 stars

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

ill give 5/5 its too good please make another one

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thanks a lot!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really good, very well executed narrative, it kept a good rhythm
also, it made me remember those flash videos: "Epic 2014" and "Epic 2015" :)
keep up the good work dude!

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killourkid responds:

haha i had to look those movies up, but yeah! that's exactly the kind of thing i was going for ;) thanks for the kind words!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

5 stars. anonymous taking the credit.

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killourkid responds:

thanks :)