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May 6, 2012 | 8:48 AM EDT

Author Comments

This is a Flash animation I worked on for college. I'm a beginner so please disregard the amateur drawings and such. I just wanted to keep it simple!

The music is "Fall of the Hammer" of "The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion OST" by Jeremy Soule. I take no credit for the music, I used it because it suited the animation well.

Thanks for watching!

Reviews


Jade-the-batJade-the-bat

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 6, 2012

Acceptable.



mysteryman889mysteryman889

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 11, 2012

i put this on my favorite


Jaba992 responds:

Thank you! ^.^


JimmyTheCaterpillarJimmyTheCaterpillar

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 6, 2012

That's really creative. I thought this was just going to be another pointless battle.



FlamingLemonsFlamingLemons

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 6, 2012

Not bad...



ArkhelienArkhelien

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 6, 2012

To be honest, I like it; especially the concept. Just some issues I can find; at certain times the characters simply jump from one place to another. Like the moment after the water extinguish the fire. Another one would be the close-up of the fire- you should make its' flames move at that moment too, looks awkward to be static only at that time.
Keep it up!


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Jaba992 responds:

Thanks for the helpful review!

I noticed these problems too while making the cartoon but as the project was for a deadline in college, I ran out of time to fix things like these. I was thinking about fixing them before uploading to NG and YouTube but decided against it as I wanted to move on to working on other stuff.

Thanks again!
Jack