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Fasten your seatbelts, kiddies, this is only the first day of what I intend to be a month-long flash marathon.
We were assigned to do an informative presentation in science. I decided to do the presentation in Flash, along with some accompanying cartoons. Of course, I only included the cartoons.
This worked on for about seven hours, so let me know what you think!
Good, but lacking something...
I think that the humour in here, really isn't my kettle of fish, with the supernova killing off some members of the Star Syndicate. I tend to stay away from Newgrounds Politics, as it's only going to cause problems :P With the second one, I wasn't so overstruck with the pictures that you gave us for the lyrics of Happy Together. A shame really, as it's a good song.
Finally, the taking away of my entertainment, by seeing something educational and replacing it with a Clock Crew "I'm not going to do this" one liner, was a little harsh. Even for a joke. Yes, I laughed... well, smiled a little, but that's beside the point.
Try putting more effort in to making the drawings look good first, before animating them, as it's still letting you down, I feel.
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that's not the star syndicate lmao
thanks for the review
This was quite hilarious to watch and seeing it being a three for one flash was pretty nice.
The first part was interesting seeing as how starts randomly blew up and then there was a shooting star that went to another planet and blew up. Then we see a couple of stars fight each other on Earth for a moment before we see a technical difficulty screen.
Then it moves to a second skit where the Moon misses the Sun. The Sun is then shown destroying things with laser vision for no reason whatsoever. Then it destroys the Moon for more unknown reasons.
Then lastly it skips to just saying it would have been longer had a random angry mob not stormed into your house and told you to not make more educational stuff.
The art aside from the photographic backgrounds I saw only a couple of times looked pretty nice. Although I think at some point getting better at drawing eyes would be a good idea.
The audio for each of the three pieces was good with the last one being a sped up robotic voice.
Overall, quirky, fast, and random to say the least. Good work on this piece.
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thanks for the review
Im Voting based on the title, I thought this was gonna be a game! But when the sun broke in happy then lazered eyed angerly, this one laughed, Bam!
Voice and art is funny.
A short film about a park bench
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