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May 4, 2012 | 5:09 PM EDT

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So this is my first Flash animation. It's nothing special, I started drawing and went on from that point, so I didn't really know where I was going with the story.
Anyways, I think I gathered some experience by creating this thing and you can expect something with a little bit more structure and quality next time!

Thanks for watching, have fun.


Wow, thanks for all the helpful feedback! I'll keep all those good advices in mind.



Rated 5 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

Really great man


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 5, 2012

If it's your first animation its realy good 5/5 but if you done about 10-15 animations 3.5/5 i like this that its little bit interactive very good make more animations like that


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 5, 2012

As you're first animation this is pretty good, I think you have some potential as a good animator. If I were to give you any advicce though, I would suggest that you try your best to avoid using overused soundtracks such as as that music from INCEPTION. But since this is your first flash animation I think I can cut you some slack and at least you picked a song that matched the tension of your story's background. There's little need for improvement here, so keep up the hard work and I'm sure you will be a popular animator faster than you might expect. 4.5/5 Stars


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

This is decent. The overall quality seems okay.


Rated 3 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

It was decent.
The animation was okay, pretty much just tweens, the voice acting was good, but not very timed with the animation, and you should use a preloader.

kaepex responds:

preloader, hm? thanks, i'll keep it in mind