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May 4, 2012 | 5:09 PM EDT

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So this is my first Flash animation. It's nothing special, I started drawing and went on from that point, so I didn't really know where I was going with the story.
Anyways, I think I gathered some experience by creating this thing and you can expect something with a little bit more structure and quality next time!

Thanks for watching, have fun.


Wow, thanks for all the helpful feedback! I'll keep all those good advices in mind.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really great man


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

If it's your first animation its realy good 5/5 but if you done about 10-15 animations 3.5/5 i like this that its little bit interactive very good make more animations like that


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

As you're first animation this is pretty good, I think you have some potential as a good animator. If I were to give you any advicce though, I would suggest that you try your best to avoid using overused soundtracks such as as that music from INCEPTION. But since this is your first flash animation I think I can cut you some slack and at least you picked a song that matched the tension of your story's background. There's little need for improvement here, so keep up the hard work and I'm sure you will be a popular animator faster than you might expect. 4.5/5 Stars


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is decent. The overall quality seems okay.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It was decent.
The animation was okay, pretty much just tweens, the voice acting was good, but not very timed with the animation, and you should use a preloader.

kaepex responds:

preloader, hm? thanks, i'll keep it in mind