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May 4, 2012 | 5:09 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Hey!
So this is my first Flash animation. It's nothing special, I started drawing and went on from that point, so I didn't really know where I was going with the story.
Anyways, I think I gathered some experience by creating this thing and you can expect something with a little bit more structure and quality next time!

Thanks for watching, have fun.

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Wow, thanks for all the helpful feedback! I'll keep all those good advices in mind.

Reviews


SpoonFullTitsSpoonFullTits

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Really great man



Noob-ManNoob-Man

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I thought it was quite good, especially for your first flash. I would suggest that you maybe make it more obvious when you want users to click something in a movie. You showed instances where your art was just great, but just dropped that awesome style in other parts. Nonetheless I liked it.



Porterhowse135Porterhowse135

Rated 2 / 5 stars

very static



BjorvyBjorvy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

It was decent.
The animation was okay, pretty much just tweens, the voice acting was good, but not very timed with the animation, and you should use a preloader.


kaepex responds:

preloader, hm? thanks, i'll keep it in mind


rsully1990rsully1990

Rated 2 / 5 stars

better story is needed


kaepex responds:

yeah, next time i'll think of a story before i start doing something and not just see where it goes