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May 4, 2012 | 5:09 PM EDT

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Hey!
So this is my first Flash animation. It's nothing special, I started drawing and went on from that point, so I didn't really know where I was going with the story.
Anyways, I think I gathered some experience by creating this thing and you can expect something with a little bit more structure and quality next time!

Thanks for watching, have fun.

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Wow, thanks for all the helpful feedback! I'll keep all those good advices in mind.

Reviews


SpoonFullTitsSpoonFullTits

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

Really great man



Noob-ManNoob-Man

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

I thought it was quite good, especially for your first flash. I would suggest that you maybe make it more obvious when you want users to click something in a movie. You showed instances where your art was just great, but just dropped that awesome style in other parts. Nonetheless I liked it.



Porterhowse135Porterhowse135

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

very static



BjorvyBjorvy

Rated 3 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

It was decent.
The animation was okay, pretty much just tweens, the voice acting was good, but not very timed with the animation, and you should use a preloader.


kaepex responds:

preloader, hm? thanks, i'll keep it in mind


rsully1990rsully1990

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 4, 2012

better story is needed


kaepex responds:

yeah, next time i'll think of a story before i start doing something and not just see where it goes