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May 4, 2012 | 5:09 PM EDT

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Hey!
So this is my first Flash animation. It's nothing special, I started drawing and went on from that point, so I didn't really know where I was going with the story.
Anyways, I think I gathered some experience by creating this thing and you can expect something with a little bit more structure and quality next time!

Thanks for watching, have fun.

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Wow, thanks for all the helpful feedback! I'll keep all those good advices in mind.

Reviews


erectioneffecterectioneffect

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Really good animation and it's a good drawing but kinda boring so I gave you 3 for the drawing and animation. try doing it more interesting next time :)



ExdosExdos

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

If it's your first animation its realy good 5/5 but if you done about 10-15 animations 3.5/5 i like this that its little bit interactive very good make more animations like that



iKARyiKARy

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Um yeah slow down with the text bubbles & also a little bit of a hint that you have to click on either the angel or devil woulda been uber useful.I almost straight 0 this just because i didn't realize there was a choice to be made.oh & a decent ending would be cool too.other than that pretty decent for a 1st video.



ArkterrusArkterrus

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

As you're first animation this is pretty good, I think you have some potential as a good animator. If I were to give you any advicce though, I would suggest that you try your best to avoid using overused soundtracks such as as that music from INCEPTION. But since this is your first flash animation I think I can cut you some slack and at least you picked a song that matched the tension of your story's background. There's little need for improvement here, so keep up the hard work and I'm sure you will be a popular animator faster than you might expect. 4.5/5 Stars



tyler5tyler5

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The art was alright but try and put a bit more effort in last time. When he faced towards the house, there was no animation at all. Characters don't have to move a lot when they talk, but they don't just stand there doing nothing etiher. Some of the emotions were drawn quite well (I had a chuckle or two) but the concept wasn't too great. Keep your animation consistent and come up with a solid concept and I could see you nabbing a good score in the portal.

As you said yourself, you didn't really know where you were going with the story and that's ultimately the fatal flaw of this animation. I'd love to see something from you in the future that's been storyboarded and is a bit more consistent with the art and animation.