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May 3, 2012 | 9:13 PM EDT

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This was originally made on August 19, 2010 and is NOT AS GOOD AS SOMETHING I WOULD HAVE DONE NOW! I'm only submitting this so that Adrellia Village fans can finally watch episode 16 as I removed it myself a while ago. Anyway, here's the original description:

Adrellia Village: Season 1, Episode 16:
Brutus and the Dark Spirit
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8/19/10 - Brutus and the Dark Spirit
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Runtime: 2:29
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You MUST watch the previous episodes before watching this one.
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Another narration on Brutus' troubled past.
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Additional Information:
Layers - 4
Frames - 3730
FPS: 25
.fla size: 44.5 MB

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

It was alright, funny that you made up your own story and you can develop the story even more. However it's really annoying to listen to the microphone turning on and off, the voice actor speaks to close to the mic and makes a humming noise.

What you should do to you next video is to have a background noise during the hole clip or records some silence and placing it overall. Would make the microphone tuning on and off less noticeable. One last thing, you should have pauses between sentences.

Otherwise I liked it. You have some talent! Hope to see some more work from you.


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MistyEntertainment responds:

haha, thanks for the critique, though this was made in 2010, the stuff I make now is so much better. i suggest that you check out "Adrellia Village #38: SE" if you wanna see the best thing I've done as of now. i'm not sure what "talent" you're referring to.