I'm sorry but you elect to use text as a form of communication yet you don't make the effort to ensure that you've got everything written correctly so it follows. It is also presented in large chunks and I personally missed a little bit of the story. There is also the issue with the really annoying sound issuing from the radio. I was prepared to forgive all that if the story had carried on for longer and maybe some interest would have been generated but cutting it short after 'taking out the trash' is hardly worthy of any artistic merit.