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May 2, 2012 | 4:00 PM EDT
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EDIT: 'wow! thank you guys for Daily 3 and tom for frontpage. i was not expecting that ^^"

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WARNING: this flash is nothing awesome or epic! so dont expect much..but i guess this enough to sadisfite DBM fans who really wants to watch the manga animated.

also! i might only continue this if i got enough support. you know..like likes or positive feedback..you know the drill...

so..tell me what you think about this. im open for every critic. negative and positive .but please i want a real ciritc. wich point out what i did wrong. and not like only saying it sucks without any point.

anyway thats it for now.
DBM is owned by Salagir and Gogeta JR
DBZ is owned by funimation fuji tv. toei animation and akira toriyama

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Reviews


WURSTKOENIGWURSTKOENIG

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I do like it.
The only thing left you need is voice actors if you planed to bring some in.
If not it is good as it is.

I´ll wait for the next part.^^


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bocodamondo responds:

they will be on EP2 ^^
thanks dude :3


GokuVegetaGogettaGokuVegetaGogetta

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Excellent.

This was actually very well made.

The grammatical mistakes are understandable as it appears you come from Morocco.

You show so much potential it's unreal. This appears to be a massive project and though it may use the work of others, you've definitely added your own twist to it.

The animation was slightly stiff, but it was still enjoyable to watch. The lack of voice acting actually added to the overall feel of the flash. You don't want a poor voice actor (or voice actress as it is) doing a bad Goku impression, so the lack of voice acting was a plus.

The plot was very well explained and I was left with no questions as to wtf was happening. Great job.

So that's all well and good but the main plus for me was your execution in doing certain things. Like camera angles, keeping characters true to their nature... Basically, the believability in this was high, meaning that this feels right.

Excellent work, and even if you don't continue to work on this Dragon Ball idea, I still think you should continue animating because you show a lot of potential. Creating something you like is fun, so I do recommend you continue with this series as you'll be more motivated to complete it since it's based on a series that you like!

Final point... You're handling the criticism like a champ, well done Mate! Take the constructive criticism and use it to improve and ignore the haters.


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bocodamondo responds:

thank you :)
accepting critic as one of the musts of an animator ^^


AarocaAaroca

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I'm actually neutral towards this.
The animation is not to shabby, and the sounds aren't too bad...
The script is a little bit unbalanced. Along the way there is an occasional misspelled word, and the text is WAY TOO FAST!! Most people have trouble reading TWO words at the speed the text flows (cough*not this is a problem for me*cough). The good part of the speech is that even though it's a little underdetailed, it's not cheesy (big points there).
This has potential.
But if you bring that weird clock character you came up with into it again you'll scare people away.

-Aaroca-
On another note; this is probably one of the first DBZ related thing that has not (yet) featured the infamous "HYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!" power-up line.


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bocodamondo responds:

hell yeah ^^ dbz is not dbz WITHOUT THE SCREEEEEEEAAAAAAAMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!! <3
but dont worry the clock guy wont appear again ^^. atleast i didn seen him a second time in the manga so far.


X3meDarkX3meDark

Rated 1 / 5 stars

srry but i just friggin hate when people create custom character on show like a custom sonic character and make vid whit it -.- i hate this realy much 1 star for the effort


bocodamondo responds:

is ok. everyone and his opinion..
and besides thers not really much of OC's made in this show.


torkktorkk

Rated 4 / 5 stars

very good idea i like it only thing i dont like is the text speed... some point you get 1 second to read the text before it changes and for me and im sure many others are slow readers so if i can maybe add in a click/spacebar to continue to next text or even just slow the gaps down a bit

other than that its good grapihcs are good storyline is also good looking forward to the next

4/5 (just because the text was too fast for me marked it down to 4)


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bocodamondo responds:

yeah sorry about that text thing. i really wanted to change it but the thing is...Flash 8 turns into a tottal bitch once the flash project gets big. it crashes alot. many Errors. and the lag gets really big. i couldnt really stand that. but the next will have voices and slower text :)
thanks