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This is my very first animation, so go easy on me. Overall, I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. There's a better version of it on my YouTube channel. Music and animation by me.
Thank you for all the feedback everyone. I found a program that would convert my more polished .wmv file back into an .swf so I've re-uploaded a better version of this.
I still have no idea how to add a loader or how to make it stop at the end instead of looping. If anyone can give me some advice on that, I'd really appreciate it.
Your attention to detail is great, this maybe your first animation but it sure is a lot better than what many throw around here.
I thought I was imagining the tree moving with the wind but after focusing on it, I must say that it was a nice touch.
The road to success is long and difficult but I can tell that you will be a fine addition to Newgrounds.
The things that I did not like though were the odd animation of the bird and that it is replaying indefinitely, but these are minor things which you will soon be able to fix with experience.
It's like watching a clock.
Something about it is very sweet and beautiful, but the walking is too long and boring.
When the movie reaches the good part, the viewers are already gone.
It makes me want to make a parody flash about it: Same thing exactly, but when he sits down near the grave - a zombie wakes up and chases him!
I believe movies should surprise you.
Alright for a first, the animation was ok but needs some fine tuning. The music was fitting, the slow start made it intriguing to watch but it was disappointing that there wasn't anything worth waiting for in the end.
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