School Fools- The Bully
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- rated 2.13 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- animation
- school
- series
- fools
Author Comments
The first episode of my new series School Fools, and basically one of my FIRST ever animations. It's a bit of a big step, but I took it.
Can Kyle Brad and Jake keep Zach from beating up Harrison? Why do soccer balls conveniently fall out of the sky? Find out!
Watch it on Youtube by clicking <a href="http://www.youtube.
com/watch?v=e0LH31RzwiM&a mp;list=UUmOyUS-hYHAmw9Xz YWwxBxw&feature=plcp"
>here</a>
Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars April 29, 2012
From the looks of it, you seem to be just starting.
The voice quality was good
For animation, I suggest taking a look at Spazkidin3d's tutorials on youtube, they REALLY helped me and a lot of people. Also maybe Funymony on youtube as well.
However, you seem to be starting to develop your own style, and thats always good.
If you want to be very interested in flash, I also suggest going to your nearest Best Buy and picking up the larger version of the Wacom Bamboo Create Pen & Touch. While it is just a bit pricey for a kid at a little over $200, its a REALLY great starting graphics tablet. Best Buy is awesome too because the tablets come with a full money back guarantee! Thats why I got one and i was iffy at first but absolutely LOVED it first time I tried it! Start saving, man. I can safely say this is worth it in the end.
Thanks for all the suggestions. :)
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars April 29, 2012
Well it kind of sucked to be honest, none of the jokes where funny,you used tweening wrong and the art was really bad, try NOT using the brush tool for everything dude.
It had a certain charm though so I give you that, but It was really bad dude, try harder next time.
And don't use your voice, try get someone older to voice for you, your voice is squeaky and quiet.
I can louden it up. xD Anyways, yeah.. xD
Rated 4 / 5 stars April 28, 2012
This is pretty good, it maybe should just be a little longer.
Thanks. And I do realize this was short, being my first one. Thanks and I'll make the next ones longer. :)
Rated 0 / 5 stars April 28, 2012
good flash but i think you need to work on your flash skills a bit more. good try though
Well thanks to the people that gimme some good criticism, to the people that call it crap, ok then.
Rated 2 / 5 stars April 28, 2012
Turn up the sound volume next time please. Also a replay button is welcome ^^
Both of those will actually happen in my next video. :)