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This is my first animation that I've uploaded on the internet.
Learned a lot from making this.
Any sort of feedback is appreciated.
But the end could be better..
Wow, that's your first? You're good. The animation is smooth, including the talking. You gotz plenty of sound and music at good places throughout. I could've seen this from a seasoned pro.
So, do you always look and dress like Steve from Blues Clues? Don't worry: I have that problem too.
Looking and dressing like Steve is basically a curse of mine.
It's good to know I'm not alone.
Thanks for the feedback!
To say this is your first... You're gonna go somewhere!
This clearly isn't your first animation ever, since it was pretty good.
The art/animation style reminds me of Space Tree.
Its really nice to see someone put some time and effort into their first animation instead of just using it as an excuse to upload shitty 5 second nothings with no sound or story. good job, Ill be looking forward to seeing more animations from you
Going back, one last time...
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