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one girls mad plight against her addiction.
i'm gonna make this into a rad new series :))))
support would be nice :)
WOOOOOO THANKS FOR FRONT PAGE :)
You have my moral support. There was some obvious influence from various things as well as plenty of popculture references, but I found the execution of the subject matter hilarious.
If this is the general layout for the series, I say go for it.
Not the best ainimation at times but still had great moments. Audio was top notch apart from the distored moment in "YOU INSOLENT CHILD!" Otherwise the story and excution was excellent.
I would have tried something a little different with the ending instead of just "shes probably crazy" ... or just the tone it's said... maybe a hushed toned version.... or.. "Shes an addict" ... or even randomer "Who doesn't like wood?" or "Shes a chocolate whore".... just (awful) ideas off the top of my head.
As for the mice, quality idea and I would have loved if they had a high brow English accident...in which then end up laughing at "how droll" the cartoon was.....and then one of them says "got any cheese" as you had already.
Just my thoughts and ideas but overall great work! 4/5
The part where's she's "doing" the chocolate really cracked me up!
Also loved the ending.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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