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Apr 22, 2012 | 6:15 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Hey everyone, this is my first ever animation so this may be a little subpar. I am a beginning animator, and I'm looking to hone my animating here on Newgrounds. I will be reading all your comments, whether it be good or bad. (If you're planning to do the latter, please make it constructive. I'll need as much tips as I could absorb.)

Thanks for viewing, enjoy!

EDIT: I apologize for not putting a replay button at the end as I was made aware of this just recently. It was n00b mistake, it won't happen again.

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kaspersluv76kaspersluv76

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

You did very good for a first time. I will be watching for more. Defintly when you make it no relooping.



zoombieszoombies

Rated 0 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

short ovious and in a loop



casualhoboscasualhobos

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

Scream was abit too loud, try to make the backgrounds more interesting. Good first attempt though!



CaramelSwirlCaramelSwirl

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

It was okay, I understand that you are new here so this was decent for your first upload. The animation on the kid's arm was weird to me, and instead of an endless loop I think it would have been better with just a replay button. The voice acting was okay and yet again this is your first thing uploaded. You have a lot of potential don't give up, I'd like to see some more from you :3
2.5/5


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MEANDNOONEELSEMEANDNOONEELSE

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 22, 2012

You just need to clarify the joke a bit more. It would be funnier if he would be sharpened and that´s is why he is screaming. Anyway it´s not bad for a first animatino keep it up =D


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