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Turn up the volume again...
Also if It gets buggy turn down the quality!
Flawless work Harry, I don't know how to describe you genius. But, I can give you a five for funny, well made animation ;D
I haven't seen one of your animations in a while. This is entertaining. My favorite part is the impaitant guns sales man.
Keep up it.
A bunch of the art/animation looked somewhat sloppy, and even inconsistent at some points. The shading in one of those shots were also all over the place. The inbetweens were also quite sloppy. Most notably, how his hair keeps fluctuating and the really odd walking animation.
I'd suggest studying a walk cycle, and trying to mimic, or maybe, and don't get the wrong idea, trace one. I don't encourage tracing in general, but if it helps you get a better understanding of actual animation, then I'm all for it, as long as you grow out of the 'tracing' phase.
Okay, so the characters aren't even on the floor a good portion of the time. The jittery dude walking over to the shops was practically floating. and that guy in the background was floating. unless, from how you drew him, he's supposed to be standing on the thing.
and if he is supposed to be standing on the shelf thingy, i can tell you for a fact that it's not physically possible, try doing that on your bookshelf.
i have to give you credit for all of the different shades of one color you put on there though, it's better than nothing.
why the yellow marks when the guy's getting down? nothing at all is more logical, and even better because you don't have to spend as much time making it.
i guess the joke was okay, not the most original, but passable. i guess a better execution would've made the joke more plausible, and therefore, funnier.
you probably would just say that you don't care. in the possibility you won't care, what's the point in submitting something to NG for people to watch? the point of the flash portal is to offer constructive criticism and gain exposure. a lot of people say they don't care, and/or get mad at bad reviews. the funny thing is, most of these bad reviews are helpful, and if they don't follow them, they'll continue to get bad reviews that enrages them.
just something to consider.
2.5/5 for effort, some detail, and passable execution.
Nice concept, and alot of time spent on the animation, the voices seemed abit qiuet though and better quality would be better but still good :)
The graphics need improving, I cant hear what they say, and it doesn't really make much sense. Sorry, 1 star.
if you can't hear turn up the volume
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